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Open Poetry #42

So Much

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-04-29 01:03 PM

So much love

So much hope

Comes to not

Where does it go

Words and thoughts

Stray beyond

Catch a glimpse

Before its gone

Much of hurt

Much do long

To remember

Now its gone...

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steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-04-29 02:46 PM

"Catch a glimpse

Before its gone

Much of hurt

Much do long

To remember

Now its gone..."
You have certainly captured well the brevity of the present

AAB
Member

since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

2 posted 2008-04-29 08:56 PM

writtin simply yet it feels so much more complex, in a good way.

"Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride

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