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another love |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Another love is when you wake me up and show the dawn of your look, is when I smile to you, or when you mock of me, or the way little loves grow up for a while. Another love is the way love splits up the images of ourselves, or the way you walk in the streets, Love is always different when I think about you. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (04-30-2008 05:08 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Yann~ Now don't you just 'inspire' beautifully ? Yeppers you do~ I love sharing heart thoughts~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved it, right to the last two lines...then it was like you lost your way and just 'finished' it. I do the same thing all the time...fluster's me! Nice write... jimmy |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Marge, Poets can help each other for the best... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Jimmy for your comment which is in fact supportive, I will if I can reconsider the easy ending... Have a nice day yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice little romantic poem, yann. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Ida and James for your kind comments. Yann |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always got to like the romantic Gem of a poem!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Love is always different when I think about you lovely Yann... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
I knew before I opened it, it would be lovely… I look forward to your romantic writes. Tammy<333 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you A W for visiting my poem.... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Roniece, hello Tammy thanks for your lovely comment, yann |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
You are a true romantic with your insights into love and the way it moves in balance. Loved this line"or the way little loves grow up for a while." Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ah, yann, this is beautiful. I do agree with Jimmy, but the rest of the poem is strong and holds its own with beauty. Alison |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I like this....the definition of love is undfineable if you ask me...a million different ways to describe it and none the same....good work... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Sharyn, your comments are so kind and fair that I wait for them everytime.... Love yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Alison for sharing. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Angel4 I really do agree with your comment, there is a million ways to love. regards yann |
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