Open Poetry #42 |
Keep Your Treasures |
shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Keep all your treasures in your heart. None kept there are ever lost, broken, or stolen. Treasures of soul value not sold value won't leave you crying over a broken vase or lost diamond. This price isn't cheap cost comes high with belief, wisdom; and courage. These kinds of things multiply when spent and never leave you short when you're low on the rent. sharyn Just a late night rambling |
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Caliban Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57 |
Far from rambling Sharyn. I wish my late night thoughts were as beautiful and insightful as this Alex |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello sharyn, in our times we need wisdom and poetry, you succeed in both with your poem.... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Sharyn,this is not a comment but a question Texas is as big as France, I would like to know where do you live in Texas? (I try by email but it didn't work) yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sharyn! "Keep all your treasures in your heart. None kept there are ever lost, broken, or stolen." ~ Ah, so true! ~So true! "Treasures of soul value not sold value" ~ Clever! A memorable gem for me to remember! I appreciate this divine dose of wisdom from you this spring morning! Have a great day! Linda |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
you ramble well...loved the poem. RV |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I have often said that there are 2 kinds of people in this world: 1) people who love things and 2) people who love people -- your lovely verse helps lend credence to that philosophy -- nicely done...thanks for sharing |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sharyn, Ramble away - I think you are on to something! A |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Thank you all for taking the time to read and post such positive comments. You are very encouraging sharyn |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Sharyn, This is fine work, with a valuable message. You should stay up late more often. I'd throw another line in the third strophe. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sharyn... I like your late night ramblings too! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love your rambling! |
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