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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-04-27 02:34 PM


Intimidation forms whenever I post a poem
I am 14 but I consider this blue land to be my home
but I get nervous cause' of so many adults
I don't know if I fit in this land, Pip is how it's spelt.

I'm sorta like Felix, I have no where to go
so I post here to relieve myself, and I want you all to know
that I consider you all to be my family, and I thank you for your care
and I am grateful that you have so much happiness to share.

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-04-27 03:06 PM


Yo Angel,

Felix says to hang in there Bro, and always look out for number one, which of course is you.  You'll do fine, just like Felix does.

Bobby  

xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-04-27 03:11 PM


Thank you Bobby, =DD you made me smile :]
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-04-27 03:20 PM


Yeppers, dear Angel! You are now a part of our family of kindred spirits. I have found that many great writers are people who have endured and conquered several struggles in their life.
Consider each mountain that you climb, as a learning experience that adds grist to your poetic mill. Every cloud has its silver lining!

Love and a big HUG,

EA


jody5
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4 posted 2008-04-27 03:24 PM


That was a beautiful post of your feelings and appreciation. You are loved here at pip

Hugs Kimberly


xTr3m3sT
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5 posted 2008-04-27 03:41 PM


Thank you both! =DD <3 -hugs-
shyvl
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6 posted 2008-04-27 04:12 PM


You are a delight to read and I also am glad to find you here on my screen.  Keep coming back.  This is a place you belong.
Thanks for sharing
sharyn

xTr3m3sT
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7 posted 2008-04-27 04:18 PM


Thank you for your kind words :]] <3
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8 posted 2008-04-27 04:24 PM


Darlin',

I'd be really upset if you were to go.  Being fourteen sucked for me (smiles) but I survived.  I admire you for putting your feelings out among adults.  I think it shows a lot of courage.  

Right now, I am watching a very dear friend die - and if there is one thing I would want each of you younger Pipsters to know - it's life is precious.  

You don't know how long you will be on this Earth - and you may not realize how lost some people would be if you were not here.

Being a teenager is hard - but when I read of some of you cutting on yourselves and contemplating an end to life -- well, my heart breaks.  It breaks for everyone of you - and it breaks when I think of my friend fighting to live every minute now that he breathes.

Sometimes, I may sound impatient in a response - but I have grown to care for you, Zach and others.  I want you to surive these years - and live to be strong adults.

Thank you for being here.

Alison

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-04-27 04:31 PM


yes, its always good to express your thoughts and feelings about life and each other and ourselves!

-- Its great medicine!



ARCTIC WIND

xTr3m3sT
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10 posted 2008-04-27 05:17 PM


Thank you both very much! I have been through so much and this forum is like a remedy to me! You all have helped me so much and I thank you all for it! <3 Alison <3 Arctic
Marchmadness
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11 posted 2008-04-27 05:48 PM


Hang in there xT. I know it's hard to believe but you will survive being a teenager (though it's hard) It wasn't easy for me. You are so lucky to have an outlet like poetry and all the adults on this site to talk to. You have a lot of talent for a fourteen year old kid. You are going to blossom into a very fine poet and you are learning as we speak.
                                  Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2008-04-27 06:56 PM


Angel... were you planning on leaving us? Oh no!! you can't, you are part of our blue pages family...we won't allow that (hmm, that was the adult talking, did you pick that up?)

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

xTr3m3sT
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13 posted 2008-04-28 02:48 PM


I was thinking about leaving but you all convinced me to stay! thanks so much!
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