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0 posted 2008-04-27 01:25 PM


When I was little my sister told me
that God has two piggy banks
for every person who lives on Earth.

One says “bad” and the other “good”.

She told me that when we are bad
God puts a penny in the “bad” piggy
and when we are good,
He puts a penny in the good pig.

She told me that when we die,
God empties each bank and counts the pennies.
My sister explained that is how He knows
where we go.

If there are more ‘bad’ pennies,
we go to hell and are sad.
If there are more ‘good’ pennies,
we go to heaven and are happy.

I understood her logic and was put at ease.
I knew that I always had a chance
to get ‘good’ pennies,
and all was not lost
when I got ‘bad’ pennies in my piggy.

I still offset the bad things I do
with good things;
and I still think of God
up in heaven with shelves
of piggy banks waiting to be counted.

Our names are painted on each pig
and we are filling them with pennies
with everything we do,

good and bad.

----

Alison


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-04-27 01:33 PM


Alison, a little birdie tells me that your "good" piggy bank is over-flowing with good karma! ~ as is your sister's!


Linda

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2 posted 2008-04-27 01:49 PM


Thank you.  We both work on it in our ways.  She is a wonderful big sister.

A

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3 posted 2008-04-27 02:01 PM


nice, ty for sharing
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4 posted 2008-04-27 02:01 PM


Makes as much sense as any other method to me. Nice writing.
                               Ida
  

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5 posted 2008-04-27 02:54 PM


I love this
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6 posted 2008-04-27 04:19 PM


Little Devil,

Thank you and you are more than welcome.

Alison
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Ida,

My sister has always been imaginative and ... she took good care of me.  Thank you.

Alison
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Caliban,

I love that you love it.

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-04-27 07:19 PM


my sweet Ali-girl... I think your 'good' pig will be over flowing   I did enjoy this, your little sister has wisdom beyond her years love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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8 posted 2008-04-27 07:34 PM


Alison,

This is a very nice poem, well written.

You wouldn't happen to know where these banks are in heaven, and who's in charge of them, would you?

Bobby

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9 posted 2008-04-27 07:55 PM


A lovely concept well put into verse.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

LindsayP
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10 posted 2008-04-27 10:36 PM



Oh Alison that is really a delightful poem
and what a wonderful way to explain to a

small child about the benefit being good or bad. I'll bet your good piggy bank was

overflowing a long time ago. wonderful post
A big warm hug my dear.

Lindsay

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11 posted 2008-04-28 06:42 AM


Thank You, such  soft written and interesting poem, I will keep this one

  yann

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12 posted 2008-04-28 10:37 AM


RDB,

Thank you, darlin'.  Wouldn't it be nice if the pigs were filled with chocolate?  Bet we won't gain weight in heaven!

Love you and am thinking of you today.

Alison
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Thank you, Bobby.  (grins)  I might but I ain't sayin'.

A
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sharyn,

Thank you. I can only take credit for the poem.  My oldest sister is the creative genius behind the logic and magic of it all.

Alison
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Lindsay,

Thank you so much.  I send hugs right backatcha, my friend.

xoxoxo
A
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Yann,

Thank you.  You are a kind person.

Alison

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13 posted 2008-04-28 11:47 AM


This is a very serious poem. I like the thought that one can control his/her destiny. I enjoyed the read through the logic of a child's developing mind!
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14 posted 2008-05-01 12:44 PM


Art,

Thank you.  Yes, it's serious to me.  I still love how my sister explained something that could have frightened me - in a way that I could understand and comprehend.

Alison

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