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absolute blackness |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. 
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In the absolute blackness of uncertainty an unexpected flash brings sight. A welcome guide in this our plight. In the absolute silence of conformity a well-directed spark ignites a ray of hope in this our plight. Straining, striving, starving, stumbling, craving, crying crawling crumbling in a serious deficiency of love and lights reality In the scheme of things the Lord knows that I need to see. He’s been the only source of light to show the path from this our plight. Rick Delmonico |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great message, expressed well, Rick! Earth's crammed with heaven, and every common bush afire with God, but only he who sees takes off his shoes. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I enjoyed this too Rick!  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A marvelous lyric, beautifully crafted! I like the repetition of the refrain, " . . . this our plight" and the alliteration of the consonants "s" and "c" in the third stanza. Hats off, my friend! Art |
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