Open Poetry #42 |
For All There Is ... |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
for all that is wrong there is a right for all that is right there is a left for all that is left there is what's taken ... for all that is taken there is a theft for all that is loved there is hate for all that is hated there is someone's hell for all that is hell there is fate for all that is fate there is someone's cell for all that is questioned there is an answer for all that is answered there is a lie for all that is lied there is a cancer ... for all the cancers there is but to try for all that is known there is what's forgotten for all that is forgotten there is a loss for all that is lost there is nothing for all that is nothing there is a cost ... In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05 |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Marvelous. enjoyed the read. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
interesting...the resulting dichotomies that develop and ultimately there is an end. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... for all that ends isn't there a new beginning? thank you both for your comments Ct |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From the alpha to the omega ~ to a new alpha! lol The push and pulls ~ the to and fros ~ for every action there is an opposite and equal reaction! ~ and so on, and so on, ... Intriguing write! EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Interesting Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ct, I keep reading this one because it fascinates me. It's all a big circle, isn't it. You wrote this very well. A |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
even circles have great depth .... it's what we learn and do along its way that signifies to what extent our own circles travel .... I like to write in a way everyone can see a little something a long the way Thank you everyone for the read and your comments Ct |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like this , it is intriguing. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey you! Since when did you move to CA? Enjoyed your deep thoughts~~ M |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting, and as other have stated, intriguing...each time it is read it brings a new appreciation for your word choices |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ctowen... you write the wonderful so well... I love this and will be sending it to my library.. thank you .. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very profound. The ending made me smile. yann |
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