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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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Kokoro niwa Nani mo nai desu Owaru ima In the heart Nothing more left Now finished Copyright © 2008 Victor Duna all rights reserved. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Victor, Beautiful in any language. Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It is so sad when there is nani mo nai desu kokoro niwa ~ and all is owaru ima.   EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victor~ Sometimes the saddest thoughts also contain such beauty~ This is one of those circumstances~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
It sounds nice in different words!-- Enjoyed the moving write  ARCTIC WIND |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Both stanzas sound lovely but heartbreaking. Wish I was multilinqual sharyn |
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