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Kaiden Lee
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since 2008-04-26
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IL, USA

0 posted 2008-04-26 08:32 PM


A day is a memory
Of things now and then
Filling up your memory
So you can relive them once again

A day is like a story
For it has a beginning and an end
There is conflict and resolution
Waiting for life to transcend

A day is something special
For each is unique in its own way
Live them to the fullest
There is nothing in your way

A day is a gift
A marvel to behold
Yet we all tend to overlook
The treasure that we hold

© Copyright 2008 Kaiden Lee - All Rights Reserved
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
1 posted 2008-04-26 09:48 PM



You certainly have the right attitude

Kaden Lee, it is always good to count your blessings, well done.

Lindsay

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-04-26 09:59 PM


Welcome to the site, Kaiden. Enjoyed your first post.
                              Ida

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-04-26 10:10 PM


welcome to PIP...nicely developed metaphors
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-04-27 04:03 AM


I, had tremendous efforts to awake this morning, your poem gave me a hand...
  
  Thanks

   yann

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