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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A strong wind Raises waves Upon the sea On land The first green buds Have just appeared On all the trees Robins herons And cardinals Swans On Miller’s Pond In darkened Rooms Left behind For this Bright blue April day The phone rings . |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful, John. Really beautiful. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think there is more to this than meets the eye, Excellent! Ida |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
beautiful. enjoyed. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Just reading again -- and agreeing with Ida. I usually feel that way about your poetry though. A |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Well written John, enjoyed. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
extremely thought provoking...and I like that... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful Yann |
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