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Kaiden Lee
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since 2008-04-26
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IL, USA

0 posted 2008-04-26 08:18 PM


As I lay here
With my time drawing near
Heaven's gates are whispering
That I should no longer fear
They tell me that it's perfect
That no one ever cries
There is no more suffering
No more tears or empty lies
Come to this Eden
Come into the warming sun
Let your days be infinite
You no longer have to run
Come to this paradise
Walk down its golden road
No more hardships of the living
Your perfect world is ready to unfold
Let go of the life
You struggle to maintain
It's your time to come
To a world without pain
Do not be afraid
For I will be your guide
I never have abandoned you
For I have always been inside
Here, take my hand,
Let me take you to My place
It's time to let go
And come into my warm embrace

The sun is slowly setting
I feel my eyes begin to close
I smile for I am ready
And no longer do I oppose
As I shut my weary eyes
Angels come into view
They are smiling with outstretched arms
And I know I'm finally through
Their loving hands caress my face
They gently pull me to the sky
Higher and higher we float
To the heavens up on high
I see her smiling face
The pain no longer in her eyes
She smiles that brilliant smile
And my heart begins to rise
Her kiss is soft, and full of love
Consuming everything within
She tells me how proud she is
That I did not give in
She whispers two words
Words I thought I'd never hear
With her angelic voice she says
Together Forever as I cry one last tear


© Copyright 2008 Kaiden Lee - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2008-04-26 08:33 PM


it is a calling .... just like these words

     felt the very strain each step took

     superbly written


Welcome to the next best home ....

Ct

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2008-04-26 09:43 PM



You paint a beautiful picture Kaiden Lee,

I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.

A warm welcome to PIP, you'll love it here

Amongst so many wonderful poets.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-04-27 01:04 AM


Fantastic...a joy to read...James
Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
4 posted 2008-04-27 01:41 AM


yes, a beautiful, soft piece. enjoyed the read.

A warm welcome to this wonderful land.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
5 posted 2008-04-27 04:06 AM


Moving poem.

  yann

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2008-04-27 09:55 AM


I, too, have heard "Heaven's Whisper" calling me Home. However, God must have changed His mind and decided that I needed to spend some more time in Earth's 'school of hard knocks'.
I no longer fear death and am better prepared for when my time to return Home does truly come.

May God and His angels bless you and bring you comfort.

A divinely exquisite write! ~ and a

Love & God's Light,
Earth Angel

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-04-27 09:57 AM


Very moving write indeed!

WELCOME TO PIP!



ARCTIC WIND

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8 posted 2008-04-27 10:41 AM


Kaiden~
What a lovely, lovely whisper~

WELCOME to this ever-growing circle of poets and friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Caliban
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since 2008-04-23
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9 posted 2008-04-27 03:03 PM


Beautiful imagery. Loved the read. Welcome! You'll like it here

Alex

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
10 posted 2008-04-27 03:51 PM


I throughly enjoyed your poetry.  Welcome to pip as well.  I was very moved by your poem and am glad to be able to know you.

Hugs Kimberly


shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
11 posted 2008-04-27 04:04 PM


Welcome to Pip.  Very moving introduction, thanks for sharing.
sharyn

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