Open Poetry #42 |
Heaven's Whisper |
Kaiden Lee New Member
since 2008-04-26
Posts 3IL, USA |
As I lay here With my time drawing near Heaven's gates are whispering That I should no longer fear They tell me that it's perfect That no one ever cries There is no more suffering No more tears or empty lies Come to this Eden Come into the warming sun Let your days be infinite You no longer have to run Come to this paradise Walk down its golden road No more hardships of the living Your perfect world is ready to unfold Let go of the life You struggle to maintain It's your time to come To a world without pain Do not be afraid For I will be your guide I never have abandoned you For I have always been inside Here, take my hand, Let me take you to My place It's time to let go And come into my warm embrace The sun is slowly setting I feel my eyes begin to close I smile for I am ready And no longer do I oppose As I shut my weary eyes Angels come into view They are smiling with outstretched arms And I know I'm finally through Their loving hands caress my face They gently pull me to the sky Higher and higher we float To the heavens up on high I see her smiling face The pain no longer in her eyes She smiles that brilliant smile And my heart begins to rise Her kiss is soft, and full of love Consuming everything within She tells me how proud she is That I did not give in She whispers two words Words I thought I'd never hear With her angelic voice she says Together Forever as I cry one last tear |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
it is a calling .... just like these words felt the very strain each step took superbly written Welcome to the next best home .... Ct |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You paint a beautiful picture Kaiden Lee, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. A warm welcome to PIP, you'll love it here Amongst so many wonderful poets. Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...a joy to read...James |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
yes, a beautiful, soft piece. enjoyed the read. A warm welcome to this wonderful land. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Moving poem. yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I, too, have heard "Heaven's Whisper" calling me Home. However, God must have changed His mind and decided that I needed to spend some more time in Earth's 'school of hard knocks'. I no longer fear death and am better prepared for when my time to return Home does truly come. May God and His angels bless you and bring you comfort. A divinely exquisite write! ~ and a Love & God's Light, Earth Angel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very moving write indeed! WELCOME TO PIP! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaiden~ What a lovely, lovely whisper~ WELCOME to this ever-growing circle of poets and friends~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Caliban Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57 |
Beautiful imagery. Loved the read. Welcome! You'll like it here Alex |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I throughly enjoyed your poetry. Welcome to pip as well. I was very moved by your poem and am glad to be able to know you. Hugs Kimberly |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Welcome to Pip. Very moving introduction, thanks for sharing. sharyn |
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