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If I Will It
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If I Will It |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
If I dream it, it is my dream. My reality created, my truth related, my hope that lights some future world, as yet unseen. And if I will it, It is not a dream. Ida Werrett |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Absolutely. it is beautiful thing that such a short poem talked precisely what future is. wonderful!!! love the read. (to be honest with you, I do wait for your poem)  Enjoy a lovely hot weekend, dear lady. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you, Seoulair. I always read your poems, too and I love talking to people from other parts of the world. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a very interesting 'write!' applause!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, the last two lines are true. That's all I'll say on the subject. Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I echo all the others Ida, short but sweet. Lindsay |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wonderful writing, Ida. I like it lots. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your comments. Sometimes I have to write what I am really thinking. I can't always write about ordinary, everyday things because my mind tends to explore many avenues. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I guess I have grown up on "whether or not you think you can, you're right" so this one fits well into that philosophy |
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reddevil013 Junior Member
since 2008-04-26
Posts 12ON, Canada |
I really love how short and sweet it is. Makes it... strong. Bravo! R.D |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
loved the poem...interesting thoughts,ida. |
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tnhness Junior Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 15 |
so true. everything is what you make of it. but you have to make something of it so that it "is". |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Dear Ida, happily your poem is here to enlighten my day... thanks yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Ida, may you manifest all your dreams into reality!  With love, Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Hope all your wonderful dreams come true MarchMadness!! ARCTIC WIND |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
thy will bedone .... ... some dreams will Well said! Ct |
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Mountain Goat Junior Member
since 2008-04-06
Posts 32High Places |
Powerful!! Here's to dreams coming true! |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Marchmadness What a beautiful way to express such a positive philosophy. Everything begins with a dream. sharyn |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ida.. this is a beauty! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all so much for your lovely comments. I wear a little gold disk around my neck that says "If I will it, It is not a dream. I wrote this poem around that saying. Ida |
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ilsm Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 61UK |
Inspired |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is indeed very interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And thank you for all your comments. |
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