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Caliban
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0 posted 2008-04-25 09:53 PM



Some People
An Exercise in Cynicism

Some people wanna watch the world burn,
And some people don’t

Some people will dance in the ashes,
And some people won’t

Some people could grind it all to dust,
And some people wouldn’t

Some people would sweep it away,
And some people couldn’t

Some people hate the world; and everything in it,
And some people don’t

Some people wanna destroy it all,
And some people won’t…

Who’s winning?


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-04-25 09:59 PM


Caliban,

This is a cute little number.  They both are.  It's a draw.

I really like this.

Bobby

Caliban
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2 posted 2008-04-25 10:05 PM


Thanks Bobby,

This was inspired by a friends poem about (oddly enough) the uses babies are put to, which was in turn inspired by an essay by Jonathan Swift. So i guess he gets credit for it. Glad you liked it

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-04-25 10:05 PM


great thoughts here Alex.. well done... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Caliban
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4 posted 2008-04-25 11:11 PM


Thanks RDB

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-04-26 08:53 AM


I liked it!!



ARCTIC WIND

Seoulair
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6 posted 2008-04-26 01:00 PM


Good. Good. enjoyed the read.
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2008-04-26 02:09 PM


What kinda people are you? ~ I can wager an educated guess!
Very negative people seldom see beyond their darkness.

I do believe the "ayes" have it! ~ and hopefully the Light in this world will obliterate all the evil and Darkness. But then again, that sounds more like Heaven than down here on planet Earth! lol

Intriguing write!

Love & Light,
EA

simon
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8 posted 2008-04-26 02:52 PM


Really enjoyed this...
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9 posted 2008-04-26 05:13 PM


I kind of look at it like those big scales.  Each has a plate and they have to balance to get the correct weight.  I think sometimes one side tips the other, but we still strive to balance the two.

Good poem.  I like it.

Alison

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