“Please, Please, Please just leave me be”

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Open Poetry #42

“Please, Please, Please just leave me be”

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

0 posted 2008-04-25 02:17 PM

“Please, Please, Please just leave me be”

A tom-tom drum beats in my head
Drumsticks ricocheting with no end
Searing with a thunderous roar
Until I feel like saying no more

No more incessant rapping noise
No more throbbing tom-tom head
No more sickening fever pitch

No more, no more
A thousand times no more

Cease and desist, I beg of you
Just leave me be, pretty please
at least grant me a moments peace
Please, please leave you monstrous beast

For you taunt and torment me
For far too long
And at the end of the day…

All I have to say is
‘Please, Please, Please just leave me be.’

[This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (04-25-2008 03:33 PM).]

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-25 02:29 PM

very good. Felt the anger and frustration.
enjoyed.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-04-25 02:29 PM

Welcome to the site, Jill. It's pretty quiet here.
Ida

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

3 posted 2008-04-25 02:41 PM

Love this and love the Smithsian reference.

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

4 posted 2008-04-25 05:03 PM

Thanks for the comments guys. I'm glad you enjoyed my diddy on headaches-the little buggers that they are. I'm surprised it came out as well as it did all things considered (ie: I had a migrane during its construction *rolls eyes*.

~J.Nicole

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-04-25 05:03 PM

Enjoyed...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-04-25 05:05 PM

Enjoyed the Write

ARCTIC WIND

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