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sewasham
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0 posted 2008-04-24 03:03 PM


Dreamscape

There’s a place in the caverns deep
That I will go to in my sleep
Where fairy folk will dance and play
It’s hidden from the light of day

Few have found this secret place
Where unicorns and fairies race
It lies beyond a crystal sea
In a twilight realm of fantasy

Down a stardust path that bends
O’er the sky where the rainbow ends
I never know what wondrous thing
My trip into this place will bring

All my hopes and wishful dreams
Wait for me on moonlight beams
When I return at break of dawn
And waken with a sleepy yawn

My mind is overwhelmed with awe
At all the wondrous things I saw
And I will keep them in my grip
‘Till I can take another trip

So come my friend and sail with me
Across the moonlit crystal sea
Into the twilight, beyond day
To dreamscape where the fairies play


© Copyright 2008 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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1 posted 2008-04-24 05:45 PM


Your mind must be a wonderful place to be.
I would be happy to cross that crystal sea.
I'm packing my bags as we speak.
                                 Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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2 posted 2008-04-24 06:03 PM


Sewasham,

This is very nice.  You make good use of end rhymes.  I like what you have here.

Bobby

shyvl
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texas, usa
3 posted 2008-04-24 06:09 PM


A delightful place you dream of.  Wish I were there.  Keep dreaming.  I also enjoyed the pattern of end rhymns.
sharyn

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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4 posted 2008-04-24 08:30 PM


this one begs to be read aloud...and so I did and enjoyed it even more.  Nice, nice, nice...think I will go and read it again...aloud
Larrysmom
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5 posted 2008-04-24 08:59 PM


This is AWESOME!!! I love this and I wanna go!!!

Tammy<333

Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
6 posted 2008-04-25 01:17 AM


Just beautiful. Purity!!!
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2008-04-25 06:27 PM


Oh, Steve, I do so love your fantasy poems! They're, well, fantas-tic!

I find it so charming when the little boy in you comes out in your writing!


Linda

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-04-25 06:52 PM


I love a good fantasy poem!



ARCTIC WIND

Caliban
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9 posted 2008-04-25 09:57 PM


My bags are packed! Where do i sign on? Great write

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

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10 posted 2008-04-27 05:54 PM


I love this, my friend.

A

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