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What's A Teardrop To Do? ... Sigh For Sy
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What's A Teardrop To Do? ... Sigh For Sy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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What’s A Teardrop To Do? ~*Marge Tindal*~  What’s a teardrop to do but .......f ............a ..................l ......................l overwhelmed by it all ? This saline notion, brimming with emotion of poetic memories in recall~ On a lash it may linger sometimes caressed by a finger of regret that came to be~ Slips to a soft cheek, beyond words of speak then in a streak … it silently falls~ This tear of emote … spills a heart-in-break~ What’s a teardrop to do … but fall ? ~In tender loving memory of our dear, dear Seymour Tabin~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, you are a fine poetess (and word artist) who has a loving heart as big as Mount Olympus! An exceptionally beautiful and highly moving piece of soul writing. God bless our Sigh Guy ~ and you. Love & Everlasting Life, Linda  |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Marge, This is a great picture and poem. Good work. Bobby |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl you say the most beautiful things and pen my hearts saddness at the loss of such a special man. Thank you for your delicate and wonderful touch Love3 and warm stuff as always Mushy x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm sure the ocean is a few inches deeper with the loss of our dear Sy... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is absolutely beautiful. Our dear Sy will be so missed. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this is beautiful |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He would have liked this tribute, Marge. Thank you. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Marge, I bet he is handing you a Kleenex. I saw him as that kind of man ~ hugs sent to you. Alison |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful, My dear lady Marge. Love you and take good care of yourself and your eyes. Love and hugs. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Although Sy will certainly be missed we can all be so thankful to have known him, whether in person or through his poetry. We, who believe, Sy believed in Jesus, can also have tears of joy, assured he's now home with his Savior. Thanks, Marge for such a thoughtful expression...as tender as he was, you are. Rae |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
What a beautiful and creative tribute! love, Barb |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hugs to you my sweet friend Marge... this is very beautiful.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is lovely, and tender! A really fine rememberance poem! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am finding I am choking on mine all day. Truly a dismal, dark day again. He and his poetry are truly missed. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A lovely tribute to a fine man and a great poet. Sy will be truly missed. Take care. Steve |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A tear as only you could describe it I think the same one has fallen on my cheek Lovely, dear friend, just lovely Liz |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I couldn't possibly add to, let alone improve upon the comments already made about this fine tribute post or its very special subject! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you for this Marge. Sy will be sadly missed. Heart hugs. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely Marge Tindal ARCTIC WIND |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just tagging for my library - thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marge, this is such a delicate, beautiful way to express your sorrow, but also your gratitude for dear Seymour, our very special Poet friend. On Titia's post I saw you were among the lucky ones who met and your radiance shows! Hugs and love, Margherita  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautifull marge~ My spirit will rise |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
"Slips to a soft cheek, beyond words of speak" My favorite line. Very nicely laid out and the inclusion of the picture complimented the poem nicely |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Very special Sis Very special... best friends best finds dale |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Marge, Heartfelt and beautiful... Yes, what's a teardrop to do? hugs, misce' |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Marge, I wholeheartedly endorse all the accolades of the other poets, Just a beautiful poem. Take care dear Lady. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Marge, I wholeheartedly endorse all the accolades of the other poets, Just a beautiful poem. Take care dear Lady. Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This catches the feelings well...fantastic writing of a sad occasion...James |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Marge, Seymour would love this. You have captured the emotion beautifully, and as always, you have provided a lovely picture to enhance your wonderful poetry. I agree with hoot - the oceans are deeper now. ~Caroline~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Marge, this was just a wonderful write my friend, one very much enjoyed and felt. Be well my friend and take care. Just Beautiful. Rick |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
just now when i was thinking of the limitations of forms in poetry, you show me a sky of boundless height. nice. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful Marge...I too miss him around here. Always read and respected this works. His memory will be in many hearts for a long time to come,, and as long as paper and ink last, his words imortal. Sleep well, my friend Sy. jwesley |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
What's a Teardrop To Do? Heartfelt and beautifully penned, Thank you for sharing  Charisma |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
~*Marge*~ Your words touch us and move us Farewell teardrop Always remember Love that will never stop Love of a lost member |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
To see all of you wonderful people give your own tributes to Seymour is a blessing to this lady~ He always was one very, very special person~ Some of you haven't been in for awhile, please know that we all are glad to see you come 'home', and give praise to our sweet poet~ (He would like this ... he had the sexiest legs !) Yep, he sure did~ In person, Seymour was just as elegant as his words~ And ... a true gentleman~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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