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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-04-20 08:50 AM


gypsy moon with her chill
pressing bosom through night
not resisting my palm of eye
let the warm is sooth side tides

and another indi-lending
idle in her leather lace fancy
with shoes untied behind her back
contemplation is a candy store perhaps

but what of the rivers there
when there is not a demon to drink
does it only stir the necessity
for something not pure white in weave

that is slippery on the inside more
than the outside has ever noticed
when eyes close to consider sinful
just this once to start an addiction

that whiskey will never cover the love of
______________

daark



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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-04-20 12:37 PM


"just this once to start an addiction
that whiskey will never cover the love of"


very "fitting" in my life right now~~

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-04-20 04:09 PM


quote:
does it only stir the necessity
for something not pure white in weave



You offer such special food for thought, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-04-20 07:21 PM


lovely, lovely, lovely Mr Daark...   

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
4 posted 2008-04-20 08:11 PM


Achingly beautful as always.  There is so much life in your verse it overwhelms.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2008-04-21 05:53 AM


ms MMs, thank you babe


________________________

ms mar, thank you for the read lady friend


___________________

ms r&b, thanks ms for the eyes


__________________

ms shyvl, thanks texas lady for the touch

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