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Open Poetry #42

I Wish You Were There

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

0 posted 2008-04-20 02:16 AM

I wish you were there
I could just swear

I'm so upset
I'm fallin out of my chair

For a moment I can't bare
Or should I not care

I need my Amy time
Just to call you mine

I can't say no
You can't go

Or hold back the tears
It's the epitome of my fears

That you're gone
I may never find another

That's as perfect for me
Or who completes my entire being

And sees me for me
But deep down I know you really don't see

My adrenalin and dreams
Running deep inside of me

I just can't help but grieve
That I may never achieve

The goal of proving
My devotion

While
Convincing you

That you've become
An extension of me and my heart

I wish you were there

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-04-20 05:52 AM

This is a powerful, intense flow of longing.

Love,
Margherita

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-20 01:52 PM

Very emotional. very good.

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

3 posted 2008-04-20 08:38 PM

Margherita and Seoulair, thank you! This only my second post and it's hard to put myself out there for the world to see.

Sincerely,

Virtual Abyss

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