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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-04-19 09:58 AM

So Precious Is Your Kiss

Oh Suzie, I like that
look in your eyes.
Oh Suzie, you don't
even have to try.
I'm coming over there
so I can kiss
your sweet lips.
Suzie I love you
so precious is
your kiss.

JamesLee
19April
2008

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-19 11:14 AM

good.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-04-19 11:18 AM

and it feels good to say it...

nice work

yann

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

3 posted 2008-04-19 02:15 PM

This is awesome James… It would make a wonderful song.

Tammy<333

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-04-19 04:01 PM

Lovely

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-04-19 10:43 PM

I think your Suziepie would be lapping this up James.. just lovely! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

6 posted 2008-04-19 11:10 PM

Suzie is a lucky girl. Good work.
sharyn

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2008-04-20 05:23 AM

Thank you Seoulair, 2islander2, Larrysmom, ArticWind, Roniece and shyvl for the wonderful responses...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2008-04-20 07:07 AM

Dear James, I love your kissy mood, cause it brings smiles and that too is a precious gift!

Have a wonderful Sunday!

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2008-04-20 10:21 PM

A very cute poem James and quite romantic.

Lindsay

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2008-04-21 09:04 PM

simple and to the point...great poem (as long as your Suzie is not my daughter)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2008-04-22 06:43 PM

Thank you Marherita, Lindsay and steavern for the wonderful responses....
steavenr she could be if she lives in Chicago and visits Hawaii 4 to 6 times a year on her holidays...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2008-04-23 12:53 PM

Aha! James has spring fever! Pucker up, you romantic Island Man! lol

Linda

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