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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-04-18 08:30 AM

They would return
by fade of day
settling back
to that first
stroke of blue
that christened
each morning

over the bend
of the pond
where sunlight
exceeded itself

back to that spot
they'd glide

white crowned by black
wrapped up in
the grieving colors
of twilight.

(*barnegat bay of the new jersey shore*)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-04-18 09:18 AM

InkyOne~
I can see them~

Lovely, lovely~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-04-18 10:03 AM

Inkedgoddess,

This is a nicely done poem. I like it. Barnegat Bay is one of my favorite places for fishing. I’ll be out there soon.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-04-18 10:04 AM

Ms Inky... you write of such beauty... thank you for sharing with me... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-04-19 06:11 AM

quote:
white crowned by black
wrapped up in
the grieving colors
of twilight.

Another wonderful offering by our inked goddess!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-04-19 07:00 AM

ms inky...would enjoy taking you places
just to punish you for where you take me...enjoyed it babe

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2008-04-19 07:04 AM

hello Inkedgoness,
Your poem is even better than the birds it describes, very beautiful writing

yann

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2008-04-19 07:51 AM

thank you kindly for reading

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-04-19 04:00 PM

Wonderfully Written!

ARCTIC WIND

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2008-04-21 02:03 AM

smooth sailing all the way!

Ct

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2008-04-21 11:23 AM

good read

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