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Wash Day |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wash Day Lately, I wander fickle winds Warm jet streams, then chilled extremes As I flounder, like a kite in tow Although, what has fate painted on my face But boundless skies, to soft blue eyes Waiting patiently the prayers of trees Budding leaves against my knees Has heaven changed horizons for a time? Here, I see the clouds throw wager at the sun Stars spin dizzy, just chips before the dawn is done Lying back into the arms of unknown scores Let them wander too beyond the great outdoors Should I say the words, that common place absurd’s? Did you feel my breath upon your neck, Or are you blind? Copyright Kkh 4/16/08 |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Beautiful write love the imagery. Inspired-8 |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Beautiful indeed. love the read. Always fine poems!!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
All I can say is lovely...absolutely lovely...may have been away for a while, but I knew where to look for a good write...If I remember correctly you were and still are an expert in writing about nature. Loved the lines: "Waiting patiently the prayers of trees Budding leaves against my knees" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is absolutley lovely TD. Beautiful writing. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "Did you feel my breath upon your neck, Or are you blind?" There is nothing quite like an impactful ending such as this. Enjoyed! |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Cunning use of words and intense imagery--loved the reading of it. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I love this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely and very Descriptive words! TD!!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Absolutely gorgeous… Tammy<333 |
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