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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the way our highways bend like they are a lover's curves on purposely shaping for the thrill of our touring sometimes too fast and other times so very slowly so we can both look down and enjoy the view of where we want to end up and then you look at me with the silly grin and ask if there is any place I would rather be than riding in your mind and before I can even speak you point at the tree of dreams and ask if I would enjoy stopping just for a lifetime or two since we are lost in time and need to practice resting _____________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lost in time~~~ yes that decribes it perfectly  M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thanks babe...it does seem that way doesn't it sometimes |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and before I can even speak you point at the tree of dreams and ask if I would enjoy stopping just for a lifetime or two since we are lost in time ah, lost in time with you Mr Daark? so very very nice... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b...thanks ms, and no, I won't stop anyone and ask directions.. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some say nothing is perfect - I disagree. This poem is an example that they are wrong! A |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
another wonderful poem. very Romantic. just beautiful. Tom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you make me snap some of the coolest pictures in my mind that one could ever have the pleasure of envisioning.... your words are true art m'friend...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you hon for the eyes and words, you bless me ___________ tomMark, thank you my friend ____________ ms gs, thanks babe for the touch |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"pause-ability" a fantastic title for an equally fantastic poem ... to get lost in! love Margherita  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Now you made my eyes tear up....you shouldn't go around making girls cry you know...lol  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Romantic Indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
My, my, my... the things you make me think! Makes me take a long deep breath in and let it out slow. just for a lifetime or two since we are lost in time and need to practice resting Mmmmm-hmmmmmm. (In Southern, that means its really, really, really good!) ~Caroline~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you dear lady for the read ____________ artic one, thank you for the eye touch _________________ ms angel, thanks for the read ms _______________ ms Ice, thank you lady C for the southern whisper |
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