Open Poetry #42 |
Hold |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
To hold you And not to hold you But it keeps holding me Not to hold you My heart is in your heart you stand by me Close enough to have you It keeps holding me to hold me To love but not to keep you To laugh not to weep Your eyes they are looking for love Anything to make me want to stay My heart keeps holding me Yet you stand by me When I needed you To look but never be To love you My heart is your heart |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
gentle expression of romance. Thank you for sharing sharyn |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
interesting way to express love. very good. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Very fine last verse: My heart is your heart and such love yann |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetVanDana~ So lovely are your thoughts ... always~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"My heart is your heart."...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
loved this read Vandana! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your heart-talk is very vividly rendered, dear Vandana! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very lovely !!! Vandana! ARCTIC WIND |
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