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vandana
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0 posted 2008-04-16 06:15 PM



To hold you
And not to hold you
But it keeps holding me
Not to hold you
My heart is in your heart
you stand by me
Close enough to have you
It keeps holding me
to hold me
To love but not to keep you
To laugh not to weep
Your eyes they are looking
for love
Anything to make me want to stay
My heart keeps holding me
Yet you stand by me
When I needed you
To look but never be
To love you
My heart is your heart



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shyvl
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1 posted 2008-04-16 06:30 PM


gentle expression of romance.  Thank you for sharing
sharyn

Seoulair
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2 posted 2008-04-17 01:06 AM


interesting way to express love. very good.
2islander2
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3 posted 2008-04-17 07:09 AM


Very fine last verse:

  My heart is your heart

and such love

    yann

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2008-04-17 07:52 AM


SweetVanDana~

So lovely are your thoughts ... always~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-04-19 06:09 PM


"My heart is your heart."...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-04-20 04:26 AM


loved this read Vandana!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-04-20 07:03 AM


Your heart-talk is very vividly rendered, dear Vandana!

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2008-04-20 09:29 AM


Very lovely !!! Vandana!



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