Open Poetry #42 |
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Past Demons |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
Past Demons Bold and blind A shadow unto the sea A miracle, the seed that sewn The vanity of my mind Looking in the a darkened me some embers left once kind A gentle soul, tortured and spit out I look ahead of me to scout And hope to see the signs about But scathed and loathed Scared and shamed Arise again and spread silk wind of gold And face the world shunned, now bold 'Live your life and live it well There is not much more of me to tell SB 16/4/08 |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This tells much about who dips often into the wisdom of his own soul. Loved the introspection. Thanks for sharing. sharyn |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Neonknight, enjoyed your poem. yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
Thank you everyone for reading. It means a lot. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I did enjoy this work of yours... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Beautiful… Tammy<333 |
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