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Beyond Doubt
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Beyond Doubt |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Beyond Doubt Seasons keep changing in this corner's view, Coloring emotions that help guide one through. There's the negative that fosters from dreamless desires, And the insight that flowers as each morning transpires. There's the rose that has dried but reminds me of then, When fantasy "became" and reached out once again To the warmth of soft meanings, where the want was in hold. It was there in the silence, where the message was told: That tomorrow is always and the never fades out, Leaving hope in this corner, in a world beyond doubt. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Wow, excellent excellent poem. *note the double excellent* LOL :-p |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah...me too...loved it! j. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Excellent writing. Loved the use of rythmn in your couplets. I am inpressed with your ability to maintain the structure throughout. Thanks for sharing sharyn [This message has been edited by shyvl (04-16-2008 04:05 PM).] |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
beautiful. The hope! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, xTr3m3sT Wow I appreciate your *double*. jwesley, glad you loved it...it was a sonnetina challenge by a friend. shyvl, Thank you and welcome. I have never had trouble with rhythm (it seems to come naturally for me)...and meeting this challenge was fun. Seoulair, thank you for stopping to read and respond. M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am most fond of the lines: "That tomorrow is always and...never fades out, Leaving hope in this corner..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely done, Maureen! It really 'springs' with renewed hope. |
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