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Gratitude |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. How good These clouds A blue sky Above my head— On this simple Nothing April afternoon A flight of sparrows . |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Really Kool my friend...enjoyed.. j. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Clouds is the poem of air. The Air |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Wonderfully simple with great imagery. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Symbiosis with what your eyes convey, hence gratitude beautifully expressed! Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I was a few days ago thinking to write a poem about clouds, I surely will do but yours is very good and light.... yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
effective minimalism...a fine capture of Spring! applause!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you write mighty fine on this April day dear John ...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Bob K Member Elite
since 2007-11-03
Posts 4208 |
Dear Huan Yi, A very nice piece of work. Well worth spending some time with. BobK. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
The measure of good poetry (in my humble opinion) is that which makes me think and interpret). This piece measures extremely high...gratitude for that which is simply there...only to be noticed when it interrupted...simply...excellent write |
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