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Open Poetry #42

Birthdays!

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-15 06:28 PM

Today as you may see, is my birthday!!

Birthdays filled with
happiness and joy
Birthdays a time meant
for more that just toys

Birthdays spent with
family and friends
Brithdays where
your age extends

Birthdays are a reminder
of how much time is left
and that it should
be spent wisely
because it
is very precious

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-15 06:46 PM

Happy Birthday to you. a time to remember mother and father too.
and nice poem

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-15 07:09 PM

thank you

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

3 posted 2008-04-16 11:27 AM

So very true especially the final verses. Thanks for sharing. I think you might have a typo where that should be than but I could be wrong. Pleasure to read as always
sharyn

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-04-16 12:47 PM

true and sad final stanza,

yann

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-04-16 04:33 PM

thank you

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