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Open Poetry #42

spring

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

0 posted 2008-04-15 02:27 PM

spring

sun shining brightly
spring has finally arrived
children on playground

[This message has been edited by Misty Lilacs (04-15-2008 03:47 PM).]

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

1 posted 2008-04-15 02:29 PM

Ah! A voice for the beauty of spring!
Perfect!

Robert

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

2 posted 2008-04-15 03:16 PM

lovely use of language.
"sun shining brightly
having no alternative" Your choice of words was cunning. Thanks for the pleasure.
sharyn

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

3 posted 2008-04-15 03:39 PM

Robert, thank you for your kind words.
Marti

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

4 posted 2008-04-15 03:40 PM

sharyn, Your words make me blush. Thank you so much.
Marti

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

5 posted 2008-04-15 03:46 PM

Love your poem. The picture is beautiful too....brought lots, lots of memories to me. It made my heart warm.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2008-04-15 08:16 PM

Wonderful...the picture too! Where was it taken...?

Jimmy

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