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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
When we’re together I feel safe When we’re together I feel loved When we’re together I feel real When we’re together I feel important When we’re together I feel like nothing can go wrong When we’re together I feel conquering the world When we’re together I feel I can face the world But when we’re apart I feel alone And can’t find my way I’m trying to find my key….which is someone to love When ever your gone I’m thinking of you You’re my world I just wanted you to know I love you black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great write JJ |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
thanks!!! |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
An intense expression of emotion. A couple of typos you might want to check like whenever instead of when ever. I enjoyed reading your work. sharyn |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
you havent writtin in a while have you? if so could you tell me the titles i really like your work!! JJ |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
thanks guys!! no i guess i haven't written in awhile. i don't write much in open poetry. if you look in the pages of Dark poems then you'll find some in there. first couple of pages. midnightdreamer black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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