Open Poetry #42 |
Writer's Block |
shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Writer's Block(a simple rhymn) Voracious lines of verse snaw at my very soul, clammoring for release, yet how I do not know. So, pristine piles of paper sit neatly on my desk as multicolored pens of ink yearn to flow without rest. All the players lay in wait longing for sweet release, but no words rise to the bait and this poet finds no peace. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Ah but they came, didn't they? Sometimes it just takes a while. Love, joyce |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You said that very captivatingly! Just write and the muse will want to dance through your pen. Love, Margherita |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Joyce and Magherita- Thank you both for reading and responding to this simple verse. sharyn |
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MysteriousCellist New Member
since 2008-04-16
Posts 6Florida, USA |
Very creative way to find something to write about. Loved it! ~MysteriousCellist |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Shyvl, This is cute. The first thing to do is abandon neatness. There is no need for it in poetry. Poetry should be rough, raw, and truthful. Uncover your hidden animal. Write like a cave person. Their writing has endured through the ages. Bobby |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Bobby- Thanks for the help I need all the suggestion I can get and yours was excellent. sharyn |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
mysterious cellist- thanks for coming by and sharing sometimes not writing is all I can seem to write about. Thanks again. sharyn |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you sharyn for sharing that good stuff.. Inspiration is hard to understand and manage... yann |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a writer's block is 600 feet long the same as all other city blocks they say if you just keep writing or walking, you will hurry to the end quickly....enjoyed you here ms |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
2Inslander2- thanking for reading and tbe encouragement. Dark Stranger - An interesting way to look at my dilemna. Thanks for reading and commenting. sharyn |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sharyn... you have great style! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Oh I love this!!!! Thank you for sharing it. Tammy<333 |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
RDB and Tammy- I appreciate that you took the time to read and make such complimentary remarks. Your words brightened my day. sharyn |
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