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Open Poetry #42

you wait and see

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-07 06:25 PM

you confuse me
your hidden trails
and horrided stares

your good at what you do
your never late
and you never
make mistakes

but some time you will
get caught
they will bring you down

you just
wait
you just
see

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-07 08:14 PM

interesting read. Thinking caught been good

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-04-07 08:15 PM

Enjoyed this Piece!

ARCTIC WIND

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-04-11 12:15 PM

thanx

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2008-04-19 09:08 PM

nice poem.

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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