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Possible failure.
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Possible failure. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
What are friends? Friends are people who you think are you friends, They get close enough so you can call them a brother or a sister, Then they knock you down to the damn ground. What is life? Life is a hidden portal through the stronghold of challenge. Waiting for you to enter so it can throw any obstacle in your path, Hoping that you fall flat on your face. Hope... What is hope? I don't know what this word means, Is it something nice? |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Friend, life and hope.... Find the true friend who is like a cane. live true life when you contend with yourself. Hope is nice when you hope nicely. A good thinking poem in a very, I mean, very negative tune. A confused mind is well expressed. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
At the moment I am in a positive tune, but my poetic soul is still inclined to the negative atmosphere I've been around. Soon I will have positive and warm poems, but for now most of my poetry will be cold, because my poetic soul is cold. -Angel. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Freinds are rare and life's a challenge but both a challenge we must accept to be fulfilled.-I think. Thank you for sharing. I like the way you structured this piece. sharyn |
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