Open Poetry #42 |
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Becoming Strangers |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced ![]() |
Losing you had to come in its own time and there's been so much time in between, enough that the memories fade away and others have stepped into the scene. It seems easy now to be strangers maybe because we have been for years, letting you go had to come in its own time when the need to come back disappears. No, it's not really a big deal to me and maybe life just made me cold, but you weren't there and I lost care, becoming strangers is better than gold. |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
hey dixi, love your words as always, trying to catch up here . this place gives so many smiles. it lightens ones heart. My spirit will rise |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie... I feel your heartwords here.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hope you are doing well. Don't have your number to call you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Passing Shadows-- Enjoyed your poem full of thoughts and Heart words, deep down from what you think is true and the Right thing. ![]() Enjoyed Deeply ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well said, my friend...just loved, in particular, the first line of each stanza... mucho ejoyed the read. j. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo, Passing shadows, That last line is sure a winner. I like this a lot. Bobby |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I understand that feeling, and for me? It was a great one.... ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"letting you go had to come in its own time when the need to come back disappears." ~ Nodding in understanding. Giving you a big, warm hug, Linda |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Losing you had to come in its own time It seems easy now to be strangers No, it's not really a big deal to me ... Wow! Dixie, darlin' - I keep saying that you are a strong woman and a powerful writer. No kidding! Wow! A |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
All has to come in its own time. The feelings in the heart are ageless. ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Dixie, these are powerful insights girl and written so well. They should be read by all those who cling and suffer endlessly. There is a right time no doubt, sometimes the wisdom takes its time to surface. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I can relate.......too recently in fact.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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