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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were decorating virgins with our eye's minds oak trees wearing glances of our first time noise you had never been there and I only was once before in a dream with no shoes and you wore high heals and we had nothing in common being mutual strangers and all but we were there together and then there were the trees that had never seen lovers before so we agreed to be their teachers and they showed their appreciation by giving us their shadows _____________ daark |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice shadow dance |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite..thanks lady friend |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanna change your title to Birthing Druids...  I like the way their patterns leave etchings in movement on your skin. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ok...Birthing Dudes it is...oh wuzz a druid?..oh I know a prudish dude? thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: So beautiful! love Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
BEAUTIFUL! ARCTIC WIND |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Tooooo smart a poem!! wonderful write.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady for the touch and smile _____________ Artic one, thank you so much _____________ TomMark, thanks my friend |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 Theres a whole lot of cool in this one d, oh how sweet the memories of youth eh?  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
in a dream with no shoes and you wore high heals and we had nothing in common I like wearing high heals Mr Daark.. RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dark Stranger, This brings back fond memories of "The First Time". Under a tree is a good a place as any. Bobby |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"oak trees wearing glances" There is nothing more speculative than live oaks watching... and switching around their hair of Spanish moss... Well done, and feeling homesick... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thank you lady donna __________ ms vandana, thank you for touching _____________ ms r & b, thank you for wearing them ms, please continue ________________ Friend Bobby Jordan, thank you sir _____________ ms sun, thank you babe for being part of the morning |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some words beg to be highlighted. ... in a dream with no shoes and you wore high heals and we had nothing in common ... I love this. A |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Have you been watching the screen play of my life from the front row??? You've done it again!!!! Loved IT!!!!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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