Open Poetry #42 |
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Waltz Of The Teddy Bears |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA ![]() |
Waltz Of The Teddy Bears When my daughter was a little girl we used to play a game It really had no structure and it never had a name But every time we played it I forgot all of my cares And now we always call it the waltz of the teddy bears We gathered all her animals, the stuffed ones so you know We’d pretend they sang and danced, it was really quite a show No matter what the others did the favorite act of all Was when the teddy bears would waltz at the closing of the ball These teddies were her favorites and we saved them until last The silly things we made them do were really quite a blast I’d make them waltz across the bed dancing with a wiggle She loved to see them frolic and it always made her giggle Gradually my daughter grew and the waltzing soon did fade But I can still remember all the laughter that they made Those times have passed as all things do but in my memories The teddy bears still sing and waltz as happy as you please When my daughter left for college we were cleaning off her shelves We found her old stuffed teddy bears sitting there all by themselves I picked them up and took them over to the bed and then The teddy bears performed their silly waltz for her again Very soon we both were laughing and then suddenly she cried And I couldn’t help but shed a tear no matter how hard I tried We both knew that those times we had shared were very dear indeed And I told her that the bears were here if there should be a need They’re only worn out teddy bears with the fabric getting rough But don’t even try to buy them because you haven’t got enough I have had happy times in life but none of them compares To the times spent with my daughter and the waltzing teddy bears |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSteve~ Your children's poetry is without rival~ I hope you are on your way to a publishing contract 'soon'~ This is priceless ... the memories tucked within the words ... a treasure for the all of time~ My grandie girlies LOVE your poetry~ And the joy for me was watching my six year old Delaney head out the door for school with her ~Poet's~ 'Out of the Whispering Winds' tucked under her arm~ She let me know that because April is Poetry Month ... she was sharing me with her whole class of kindergarteners~ *sigh* ... these are all memories in the making~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks Marge, I'm glad your babes enjoy the poetry. Sounds like a little of Grandma has been passed on to them and it's good to know there are some up and commers to take over when we're gone. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I read this one with sheer delight! It made me think of my little daughter and her tattered security blanket! She's 28 now, and only a piece of the blanket remains in a small frame with a glass cover. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. Art |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks Art, I have a similar tattered blanky remnant carefully stored away. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think if you published a book for children you would be a very rich man, Steve. They say there is no money in poetry but writing for children is dirrerent. You should think about it. Your work is special and there's an audience out there who are just waiting to read it. Ida |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
heavenly song from heart. What a touching movie stared by a father and a daughter!!! very , very good. Thank you for sharing. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
What a wonderful experience to share--your daughter had a blessed childhood I'm sure. Thank you for the joy this poem brought to me. Also you have quite a talent in rhymning verse-share it some more sharyn |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a girlfriend who has a teddy bear fetish. She collects them, all kinds, all styles, all shapes and sizes. I'm hoping she'll put this poem with her favorite bears. Oh, you don't mind that I share, now, do you? ![]() |
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