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sewasham
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0 posted 2008-04-14 11:50 AM


Waltz Of The Teddy Bears

When my daughter was a little girl we used to play a game
It really had no structure and it never had a name
But every time we played it I forgot all of my cares
And now we always call it the waltz of the teddy bears

We gathered all her animals, the stuffed ones so you know
We’d pretend they sang and danced, it was really quite a show
No matter what the others did the favorite act of all
Was when the teddy bears would waltz at the closing of the ball

These teddies were her favorites and we saved them until last
The silly things we made them do were really quite a blast
I’d make them waltz across the bed dancing with a wiggle
She loved to see them frolic and it always made her giggle

Gradually my daughter grew and the waltzing soon did fade
But I can still remember all the laughter that they made
Those times have passed as all things do but in my memories
The teddy bears still sing and waltz as happy as you please

When my daughter left for college we were cleaning off her shelves
We found her old stuffed teddy bears sitting there all by themselves
I picked them up and took them over to the bed and then
The teddy bears performed their silly waltz for her again

Very soon we both were laughing and then suddenly she cried
And I couldn’t help but shed a tear no matter how hard I tried
We both knew that those times we had shared were very dear indeed
And I told her that the bears were here if there should be a need

They’re only worn out teddy bears with the fabric getting rough
But don’t even try to buy them because you haven’t got enough
I have had happy times in life but none of them compares
To the times spent with my daughter and the waltzing teddy bears


© Copyright 2008 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-04-14 11:56 AM


OhSteve~
Your children's poetry is without rival~
I hope you are on your way to a publishing contract 'soon'~

This is priceless ... the memories tucked within the words ... a treasure for the all of time~

My grandie girlies LOVE your poetry~

And the joy for me was watching my six year old Delaney head out the door for school with her ~Poet's~ 'Out of the Whispering Winds' tucked under her arm~
She let me know that because April is Poetry Month ... she was sharing me with her whole class of kindergarteners~

*sigh* ... these are all memories in the making~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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sewasham
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2 posted 2008-04-14 12:01 PM


Thanks Marge, I'm glad your babes enjoy the poetry. Sounds like a little of Grandma has been passed on to them and it's good to know there are some up and commers to take over when we're gone. Take care and Have fun. Steve


gilead
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3 posted 2008-04-14 12:05 PM


I read this one with sheer delight! It made me think of my little daughter and her tattered security blanket! She's 28 now, and only a piece of the blanket remains in a small frame with a glass cover.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

Art

sewasham
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4 posted 2008-04-14 12:11 PM


Thanks Art, I have a similar tattered blanky remnant carefully stored away. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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5 posted 2008-04-14 12:24 PM


I think if you published a book for children you would be a very rich man, Steve.
They say there is no money in poetry but
writing for children is dirrerent. You should think about it. Your work is special and there's an audience out there who are just waiting to read it.
                                 Ida

Seoulair
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6 posted 2008-04-14 03:31 PM


heavenly song from heart. What a touching movie
stared by a father and a daughter!!!
very , very good.
Thank you for sharing.

shyvl
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7 posted 2008-04-14 04:06 PM


What a wonderful experience to share--your daughter had a blessed childhood I'm sure.  Thank you for the joy this poem brought to me. Also you have quite a talent in rhymning verse-share it some more
sharyn

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2008-04-14 04:18 PM


Fine writing...James
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9 posted 2008-04-14 05:41 PM


I have a girlfriend who has a teddy bear fetish. She collects them, all kinds, all styles, all shapes and sizes. I'm hoping she'll put this poem with her favorite bears.

Oh, you don't mind that I share, now, do you?




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