Open Poetry #42 |
Hope |
x-tears-x Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43England |
Not everyone will fall The rain is pattering on the window, It’s flooding all the streets, Toddlers are in their wellys, But they really want bare feet. The rain is like my tears, Smothering everything, It is just so similar, It keeps on flowing, I just sit here against the wall, With my mascara down my cheeks, I was so stupid, To believe he could do that feat, But I smile through the blur, Of water running down my face, Because now the rain has stopped, It’s gone without a trace, It’s then I know things will get better, Get better for us all, There’s hope in every situation, Not everyone will fall Yey.xxx |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Becky welcome to Passions & an interesting first post...I read it a couple of times & it put me in mind of the advert on Tv over here about drinking too much, where the guy climbs the scaffolding & falls? Nice job... John |
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x-tears-x Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43England |
Um ok thanks |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
that was an interesting piece, there are some great images in there and some beautiful poetry. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
there is always hope, my sweet friend, always hope... take care.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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x-tears-x Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43England |
thanks |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
beautiful. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great JJ |
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