Open Poetry #42 |
par three gata nine |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it was that parking lot with wall to wall nothing in shadow shoes the high heel kind stepping down from oak trees letting the light shine between limbs and over secrets you could have been there and would be later perhaps wearing black and smiles looking around at strangers wondering what music it was that you heard in your head and who was playing it did they smoke cigars and ride loud harleys or were they more suave in their bentley tin just letting their eyes out for a stroll around your curves which they took slowly or perhaps it was just a stranger that didn't fit anywhere like never been there before the virgin of first time and glances that were newly pressed never worn without being tucked in but were now unbuttoned handless and it was you that had undone them _______________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles... now this is a lovely slice of you Mr Daark... thank you! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This brought a smile to my face as well but certainly a smile of appreciation for the looking and the interpreting which you have done in such a masterful way. Helen |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks babe for the eyes ____________ ms honeybunch, thank you too for the smile and thoughts |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fascinating, dear D., riding the emotions of your words is almost as exciting as riding a harley (some memory of the past!) Love, Margherita |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This one makes me feel soft, sultry, while unaware… Tammy<333 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks hon for the read and review ______________ ms larry'smom, thank you for the peek in and feelings |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
or perhaps it was just a stranger that didn't fit anywhere like never been there before the virgin of first time and glances that were newly pressed never worn without being tucked in but were now unbuttoned handless and it was you that had undone them ~*~ I hope that you know when you write, you should always expect a heavy, hungry sigh at the end... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...I do enjoy your sighs...thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I remember telling my Mom when I was little that "hungry eyes" was a stupid expression and that it should be "honey eyes" (I was a little romantic). Anyway, I have hungry eyes reading this. Love it, A |
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