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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Still, there is this lack of contact and I’m waiting while wading through endless days of endlessness; where all blends into an offside knowing of knowing with shake of head and with the utmost of certainty said never, ever, ever again. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Still, there is this lack of contact and I’m waiting while wading through endless days Donna...this is so sad and yet so beautifully expressed.. .love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
endless days of endlessness; where all blends into an offside knowing ____________________________________ I love this, and that especially! A woman's intuition is what it is, sadly sometimes. Hugs you~ |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
nice write JJ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This was so well done. The compactness of the lines belies the wealth of emtion sharyn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You touch the heart of this reader, dear Donna! Very intense write. We are the happiest when we don't have expectations, but the longing and yearning keep us on the edge always. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed it but didn't understand which suffering... have a nice day yann |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it is a true poetry with deep emotion... slightly sad but sure of itself clever talks delay friendship! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I think we've all said the same thing...I know I have, but never as metephorically beautiful.... Hugs Lee J. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This is just so gorgeously sad… Beautiful. Tammy<333 |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That sounds so sad Donna Endless days of endlessness. Please try a change of mindset dear Donna, a volunteer job is often a great way to meet other folk and give you other things to think about. My thoughts are with you. good luck. Lindsay |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to you all Pip friends and Lindsay, thank you for understanding. Hugs to all. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna, I hope that you never lose sight of how beautiful you are. While love is always good, allowing others to control your happiness is not. Easy to say, I know. But, darlin', you have too much to share to be so quiet. I miss you and you are a special woman in my life. xoxoxo A |
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