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shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

0 posted 2008-04-12 07:44 PM

Secret Pleasures

To touch him
while he sleeps,
a delicious secret pleaure
that loosens free the longing
too difficult to share.

To watch him
in silent dreaming
fills to overflowing
a flood of imprisoned emotions
too difficult to share.

It's a simple understanding,
these convenient sheet-toused tumbles.
No promises to be kept.
So I touch him
while he's sleeping
and he doesn't know
the rest.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2008-04-12 07:45 PM

so utterly soft and poignant...

wonderful writing

NeonKnight
Junior Member

since 2008-04-12

Posts 36
New South Wales, Australia

2 posted 2008-04-12 07:48 PM

fascinating, very sensual, and beautiful

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-04-12 08:11 PM

beautiful

welcome to PIP!

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

4 posted 2008-04-12 09:34 PM

LeeJ, NeonKnight and passing shadows- thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read and respond to my verse.
sharyn

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-04-13 03:16 PM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2008-04-13 03:56 PM

Welcome to PiP! This is a lovely
beginning, and it is our sincere
hope that we will continue to see
such from your pen, and more!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-04-13 04:10 PM

Welcome to Pip!

Lovely first sharing, enjoyed its softness.

Love,
Margherita

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

8 posted 2008-04-13 05:44 PM

Nice write Sharyn & welcome to Passions.... John

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

9 posted 2008-04-13 06:47 PM

Thank you everyone for your supportive warm comments. Also I appreciate your taking the time to read and share. I feel truly welcomed;almost enough to try a second post.
Thanks again
Sharyn

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-04-14 12:20 PM

oh Sharyn, I nearly missed this and I too, welcome you to our pages blue... I look forward to reading more of your lovely work here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

11 posted 2008-04-14 06:54 AM

thank you Shyvl for your wonderful poem,

Yann

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

12 posted 2008-04-14 07:18 AM

I don't really comment on a lot of poetry....but this piece was fantastic.

I couldn't help it :-p Excellent write.

-Angel.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

13 posted 2008-04-14 04:49 PM

Thanks RDB Yann and Angel. I appreciate your taking the time to read and write such lovely comments. Your praise makes me blush. Thanks again.
sharyn

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

14 posted 2008-04-15 01:02 AM

sharyn,

I like this a lot. You really touched my heart with this one.

Alison

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

15 posted 2008-04-15 04:33 AM

Thank you allison for your encouraging thoughts.
sharyn

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

16 posted 2008-04-15 08:45 AM

I really enjoyed this...

Welcome and I look forward to more!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2008-04-15 08:47 AM

Sharyn~
By all means ... a sincere WELCOME to the site~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

18 posted 2008-04-15 12:57 PM

A touch of warmth on a cool spring morning! I am moved!

Art

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

19 posted 2008-04-15 01:40 PM

deep romance. Beautiful and soft.
Love the read.
A warm welcome to PiP the wonderful land.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

20 posted 2008-04-15 02:23 PM

(sigh)

if only!

R

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

21 posted 2008-04-15 02:49 PM

To all you wonderful people--Thanks so much for the kindness and encouragement your comments have given me.
sharyn

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