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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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you got heartbreak written all over you homage or threat? did you believe in my naivity I wouldn't know? cultural formations & weak philosophical text you found variety of fields in the sound of humanity intelligently employing interdisciplinary methods chaos to gain a firm foundation in a second arena I am that arena your soul purpose in life you hate me so... the tool necessary, for your darkest visual art diverse forms compliment your method of media but I am from a world you’ve never known that is what you dispise ahhh yes, you stole any childhood that lived your sabbatical found in keeping temporal distance rooted hatred, fear, frustrations of those who speared your heart significant spaces translated your topography you rule your world with dramatic components digging a fleet of events building imaginary walls observed by your rules and modern surveillance and a heart as cold as ice this momentary assessment you’re thrusted upon my land becomes your abstract commodity something of which you feed that which you personally attend your symbol of love died with potential in your underworld of intense dislike but you will never taste an easterly wind nor soar its waterfall you imagine yourself detached from the world changing art, representing strange power in your far off out of body experience you’ve raped this nation diminished inner from outer endlessly permeable, but…. one day, the embodiment of your discourse, will turn and look at you straight in the eyes… then and only then, in that brief second will you realize what you’ve undermined by then, my friend, your beauty will be gone the atrocities you’ve embodied will resonate within as for me, I feel nothing… and regret for trying…so long I ask you, do you know your angry most of the time, but never know why? deceipt, pain, sorrow, despair aren't you proud...? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"aren't you proud?" that sure says it all  |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Wow- Your language richly conveyed the anger and the sorrow of it. sharyn |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes LeeJ, this was conveyed very beautifully - it is an amazing write.. a keeper for sure  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Again I am blown away by the most gorgeous beauty within these blue pages… Tammy<333 |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Well hi there girlfriend. See you are still writing your heart out. Spilling thoughts upon the page like a tumbling waterfall. Good Jobber Talk to ya later. Hugs Your Friend BonBon  |
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