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the real star |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
When I was young I longed for the stars, sizzling shooting ones and far away oranges in the trees of Heavens, I looked up every night on God’s embroidery. Now i consider that the only real star is the one in your heart when somebody loves you. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles...Yann, you have smiled my evening... this is a beautiful gifting from you mon ami...  merci.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (04-12-2008 07:08 AM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
merci Roniece hello to australia , It's the week end here and spring vacation during 15 days, I can breath again....Thank you very much for all your nice comments and poems.... It must be late in sydney now, it's just midday here (i don' know exactly the jetlag, it could be 8 or 9, have a nice day yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ici c'est 20hr40... I hope you have a good school break... our children here too commence 2 weeks of holidays now .. and for moi, it will mean my travel time to work will be much faster! Bonne journee... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, indeed it is.... but then there are those who know they're loved without someone...does that make any sense? Thank you for such a beautiful poem... Lee J. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Yann, good job my friend...you have improved greatly in such a short space of time. I do so enjoy your postings. Please continue to brighten my day...Thanks John |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Oh this took me by surprise and gave me a huge smile to wear… Thank you… Tammy<333 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine Romanticism... I love those "sizzling shooting stars" though! serious applause for this interesting 'penning!' |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you very much John, your comment is nice and get me smiles, i like your writings very much and don't miss reading them.... Have a very nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Tammy, enjoyed your comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bruce, when i get a good writing you trully are here. thanks yann |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
sweet and romantic. very good!!! |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
You have some unique phrasing and fine imagery. Especially these lines. "When I was young I longed for the stars, sizzling shooting ones and far away oranges in the trees of Heavens, I looked up every night on God’s embroidery." Thanks for sharing--I'm sorry it took me so long to see this sharyn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Yann~ Soooooooooo beautiful is this~ *sigh* *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Seoul, i always like reading your poetry.... I appreciate your comments... thanks yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Sharyn and thank you for sharing your talent... Very soon your comments will be indispensable for me. Have a very nice day. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Marge, smiles yann |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yann, I love "God's embroidery" - what a great use of words and thought. I like all of this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Alison, it always great to read your comments...Enjoy it... yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hmmmmmmm ... I think I am still young, dear Yann!  heheNothing compares to "God's embroidery"! You say that so beautifully! But of course to have a heart star IS an immense joy too! Very lovely write! Love, Margherita |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Read again (no, of course more than two times) It makes my hear warm now. The voice is very pure!!! enjoyed again |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Margherita, your comments and writings are so nice, I'm glad when when i read about you... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you seoul, enjoyed your comment... Have a nice day yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi yann, I love this poem. I have a special feeling for the night sky. Your writing is improving everyday and I think you are even getting used to some of our typical American expressions. You are a quick learner and keen observer. Ida |
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