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Open Poetry #42

Ottawa Spring Morning

SkaaDee
Member

since 2008-04-07

Posts 116
Canada

0 posted 2008-04-11 09:11 PM

bitterness assaults the face
for daring to confront it. mysteriously,
a powder tornado garners the desire
to swirl from the freeze, searching
for intruders, until it gives in to natural order
and folds back with the others.
the wide open blue beguiles
that long trusted colour, denying the weary its relief.
the trees, that are usually clothed by now,
dare not in fear of breaking code
and inviting retribution. instead
they appeal to the solar deity
whom peers in but must not interfere.
the Mind of the unfinished season
frantically clings
to one more day of dominance.

[This message has been edited by SkaaDee (04-12-2008 09:30 AM).]

NeonKnight
Junior Member

since 2008-04-12

Posts 36
New South Wales, Australia

1 posted 2008-04-12 02:25 AM

a truly fascinating mix of words.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

2 posted 2008-04-12 05:35 AM

Welcome to passions....this is intense to say the least.....my favorite part is;

"the trees, that are usually clothed by now,
dare not in fear of breaking code
and inviting retribution. instead
they appeal to the solar deity
whom peers in but must not interfere."

B~E~A~U~tiful...

~~~kingsangel~~~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2008-04-12 06:45 AM

enjoyed it

yann

SkaaDee
Member

since 2008-04-07

Posts 116
Canada

4 posted 2008-04-12 09:28 AM

thank you for the welcome and for reading.

I wrote this on the first day of Spring.
It's been a long winter - there is still a foot of snow on the ground.

[This message has been edited by SkaaDee (04-12-2008 11:00 PM).]

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

5 posted 2008-04-12 08:22 PM

This is beautiful… makes me feel cold and amazed.

Tammy<333

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

6 posted 2008-04-12 08:27 PM

Wonderful imagery. I enjoy reading about the mysterious ways of nature.
sharyn

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