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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-04-10 09:37 AM



Lovescaping


he plants
by the moon
to harvest
my heart

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love"  Anne Rice



© Copyright 2008 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-04-10 09:55 AM


1slick_lady,

This is a lovely little piece of poetry.  I like it loads.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-04-10 05:18 PM


A pleasure to read...James
effjayel
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3 posted 2008-04-10 05:26 PM


Damn this is good! so few words, so powerfully put....


Larrysmom
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4 posted 2008-04-10 09:25 PM


WOW! To say so very much with such few words... This is an amazing poem.

Tammy<333

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-04-11 08:25 AM


just wonderful Helen!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2008-04-11 08:25 AM


Helen, this IS lovely!!  Hugs...
passing shadows
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7 posted 2008-04-11 08:26 AM


awesome as always!

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8 posted 2008-04-13 02:48 AM


!!!!
icebox
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9 posted 2008-04-13 04:40 AM


So full of wonder!

Brava!!!


Honeybunch
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10 posted 2008-04-13 07:58 AM


And so ... one Helen bows to another Helen!  Very well said!
LeeJ
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11 posted 2008-04-13 10:43 AM


whoa...you never cease to amaze me....

so good to see you

Hugs
Lee J.

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12 posted 2008-04-13 11:30 AM


:-)
shyvl
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13 posted 2008-04-13 11:33 AM


I loved the way you express such a wealth of emotions with so few words
sharyn

Huan Yi
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14 posted 2008-05-04 09:24 PM


.

In truth,
I just missed you . . .


John


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Richy
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15 posted 2008-05-04 09:59 PM



Well I've done land, scaping before, if you ever need any help. Wait, did you say the moon... oh, that's right, my rocket mower is in the shop, snap! Maybe next time. Hi Helen, so nice to see you again. I've missed your poetry, and now I'm reminded of why again. Can't wait to read more.

Rich

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16 posted 2008-05-06 02:13 AM


Helen,

I have missed you too.  And this is wonderful.

A

Marchmadness
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17 posted 2008-05-06 04:09 AM


So few words, such a grand poem.
                         Ida

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18 posted 2008-05-06 11:34 AM


nice
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19 posted 2008-05-06 12:42 PM


if brevity is the soul of clarity, this is such a soulful write
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20 posted 2008-05-08 01:21 PM


Wow...

is wish this poem were mine because you say it so perfectly.



Love ya lady!

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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