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Open Poetry #42

This is Thus

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2008-04-09 07:33 PM

In an instant as this is the process begun,
a selection is made from an infinite choice,
each is placed in its turn on the merits of one
which can best serve to lend our expression a voice.

Once the tempo is set, as a pulse it becomes,
running constant and true as the passage of time.
On occasion to seem as a song that one hums
whose succession of notes downward spiral and climb

on a scale that is set where ones' thoughts hap' to lead.
Captured here, in mid-page, with a wave of a wand
sounding sweetly to ears grown attuned to a need
for expression to free itself unchained from bonds.

There to linger a time in a sub-concious haunt
like some demon had penned it with intent to taunt.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-04-09 08:04 PM

Doc~
Thanks for writing for MY ENJOYMENT~

Well executed Sonnet, sir~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

2 posted 2008-04-09 09:50 PM

This is beautiful...

Tammy<333

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-09 10:59 PM

enjoyed the read and the thought.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2008-04-09 11:45 PM

Sometimes the music is ominous, isn't it?

I so admire your art, m'friend.

And yanno? I take this to heart, because I generally write the stuff that just won't shaddup in my head.

I've missed you, lovie. I'll try to pop in more.

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

5 posted 2008-04-11 07:45 PM

Dear Marge,
Thanks, and I won't debate the sonnet thingy this time, lol.
Doc

Tammy,
Thank you for saying so.
Doc

Seoulair,
Thanks I'm glad you thought so.

Karen,
Lol, I'm the one that doesn't show up too ofte. Thanks.
Doc

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