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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Envisioned in my mind I see The fragments of the life we lead Where shattered words Are left in place And words of love All fall from grace Patterns of a damaged view Where once we loved We just construe That what we mean is not the way I look to find a better way Break the binds That led us wrong Redefine to make us strong Relax and not look for that pain That last word said That does contain The lyric of some angry thought We said instead of loves report I look inside take a second wind Before I’ll speak a sarcastic whim When anger flies I’ll walk away Count my thoughts before I say And come back in to say I care Say I love instead of tear A piece of the bind that we use To live our life already confused By gestures, words and spears we throw A solemn vow that I will show That I am yet a better man Than that you’ve ever known. With thoughts of you I say this line I’ll love you true all through time I’m sorry for misguided acts The way our love has gone off track I’ll strive to find a better way To show you how I feel |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
felt the emotion. Very nice Love the read. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
Spiked, A lot of feeling. Now is a nice time for reflection (for me). Thanks! V/r, Virtual Abyss |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's good to see the real you? *laughing* In any case, George said to say "hey" and that Brian would also love to hear from you. (People worry yanno.) btw, if you happen to need a pitchfork, I've retired mine.  (I've got a tail too, also retired.)You look good in red though.  And you always did write best from your heart. Keep showing it like this, and you might lose your status in Hell. *chuckling* |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this was a wonderful read.. wonderful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This is awesome… made me feel rushed to show love. Tammy<333 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great stuff here! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Haven't had much time to browse here but was a nice surprise to see so many comments. thanks so much. Rich serenity i will try to find time to call them at the plant see whats up. thanks |
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