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Open Poetry #42

Well Kept

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-04-09 09:08 AM

Well Kept

turquoise water
     licks at sugar
             spilled from a canister
                     on the beach floor
                          sand pipers run
                      aimlessly
              back and forth
       to the edge
constantly sweeping

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-09 11:31 AM

simply beautiful. another good one.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-04-10 03:35 AM

Very enjoyable day at the beach.
Ida

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-04-10 03:41 AM

I do love the beach and you brought a bit of it to me before I sleep.

Thank you.
A

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2008-04-10 04:51 AM

I feel I am sitting right there taking it all in. Love it."late"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2008-04-10 10:44 AM

yes!

I'm going there right now!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2008-04-11 10:22 PM

fine impression!

interesting visual effect via word placement!

applause!!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

7 posted 2008-04-11 10:35 PM

.

What irritates me
is your inability
to accept that it’s over

Still
I read you

Only God knows
Why

John
.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

8 posted 2008-04-12 12:05 PM

Your choice of words was very unique and made the beach new and wonderful. Thanks

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

9 posted 2008-04-12 06:44 PM

Again, WOW! You have blown me away…right to the beach. This is gorgeous.

Tammy<333

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