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Open Poetry #42

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Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2008-04-08 02:13 AM

Write the lines that a lonely heart finds,
Speak the truth locked in forsaken minds.

For this is poetry, a Picasso of words.
A story played out with a flowing of verbs.

A landscape created with a few words on hand,
Or a love unspoken, yet written so grand.

To write out these feelings or describe these sights,
As the moon and the sun each day and night fights.

Will bring fulfillment to you and understanding to me,
For you can describe what I cannot begin see.

Now put your pen to paper and begin to write,
And describe to me yet another breath taking sight.

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-04-08 12:23 PM

Beautifully rendered love mood. Inspiring.

Love,
Margherita

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-08 02:39 PM

Beautiful and truth. You are very right.
enjoyed.

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

3 posted 2008-04-08 04:32 PM

Now I want to write…

Tammy<333

Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

4 posted 2008-04-09 02:16 AM

Thank you, i'm glad everyone liked it

it is very different to what i normally write so i was a little hesitant posting it

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