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3 Crows |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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 Three crows flying North to South Shadows cast on fields of green Every day they hurry by Floating in a line A trio of order No time to stop and chat I lean forward in my rocker Straining my ears to hear Once in awhile a brief hello escapes their beaks So Clever |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tina~ An absolutley gorgeous read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
This is such a pretty picture & so vivid. Thank you... |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
great poem clever talks delay friendship! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I like the idea of "hello". A very fine poem. Art |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed very much your poem Tina...I love birds... yann |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
great! love the read. a beauty. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely writing Tina! ARCTIC WIND |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks all...  Anyone have any idea why these crows fly in a group of '3' always..? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful picture and words, dear Tina! I don't know why they fly in a trio ... But they are smart no doubt. Love, Margherita |
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