Open Poetry #42 |
Breathing God |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* Breathing God I see you climbing lonely hills burdened by all the mysteries randomly gathered over the years. From atop the world you scrutinize frosty cosmic valleys of tears and shiver in the grip of solitude. You long for soothing replies. A tiny flower wants your eyes to reflect its charm upon your soul. As if guided by soft petal whispers you feel ready for contemplation. To those who are willing to listen nature offers deepest revelations. You long for a new awareness. See how the little flower sways how it graciously dances in the breeze? How it bravely withstands the storms? See how it surrenders to its fate, how it displays its innate loveliness? It smiles right into the Creator’s eyes! It makes love to the air and to the sun to the stars and to the moon, it gracefully receives the rain and awakens to the caress of dew. It opens to life without fear, it asks for nothing, it just is. Yet it is never ever lonely, for it quietly breathes God. You long for true oneness. Do you hear the flower’s love sighs? In gratitude it sings its song of praise! It really says you are never alone, not even in midst of nowhere! You are immersed in divine essence clinging to your skin, mind, heart and soul! Peel off the layers ofencumbrances, it’s time for you now to sing along … …. breathing God. * |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, how I needed this! You have managed to convey what has been pulsing in my soul. For this, I thank you. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Margherita, I was going to thank you for bringing me a breath of spring then realised, it was actually the kiss of life... You are a very special Lady....John |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Margherita very well crafted. Enjoyed it and the philosophical subject, there are so much things near us that give sense. Have a nice day yann |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I agree with the others. This IS a quite beautiful to read on a Sunday. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"It makes love to the air and to the sun to the stars and to the moon, it gracefully receives the rain and awakens to the caress of dew. It opens to life without fear, it asks for nothing, it just is. Yet it is never ever lonely, for it quietly breathes God." Margherita, ye be such a flower. With love, Angelo Terrestre |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, This is a nice tribute to the species man. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marghertia! This is so lovely! Very beautifully written! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Margharita, you have such a deep and beautiful soul and it shines like a beacon of hope in this poem. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Indeed a pleasure to read...and again...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes Marherita you are a special lady to write the way you do. That is one great post, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, your soul is god touched...enjoyed this |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady, this is most beautiful. Lovely writing |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very beautiful and uplifting. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
i always draw inspiration from you. your this one is also serene clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all for the loving replies, dear poet friends! You warmed my heart. Cherishing you. Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
stunning write Margherita.. beautiful and stunning... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Roniece! You were missed! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what could be more perfect than this: "A tiny flower wants your eyes to reflect its charm upon your soul." Margherita you delight my eyes and soul |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
((((Kate)))) and you delight me with your presence here! Thank you. Love, Margherita |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
This is so special. It is indeed, a reflection of the author. God bless, Rae |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh dear lady...your poetry is inclusive of all religions. It speaks a spirituality that reveals that you not only talk the "talk"--you walk the walk. This is perfection, and you are a lovely spirit indeed. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, I think you breathe life into poetry - you exude beauty, love and celebration. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Rae, Karen and Alison, thank you from my heart. You bless me. I just try to walk the walk, dear Karen, sometimes I stumble ... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Margherita - You are most certainly an inspiration to us all. Thank you for this beautiful poem on a night when I needed to read it. Helen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ Such total beauty here~ Beautiful thoughts from a beautiful lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Helen and dear Marge for your kind words! Love, Margherita |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Dear Margherita, the beauty of this poem is beyond my words… Tammy<333 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now I will take this one for me you have made my day dear Magherita! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
wisdom and sensitivity...you possess both.. "You long for a new awareness." yes.... always... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A breath of fresh air on a somber April morning. Thanks for the marvelous gift. Art |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
This is so inspiring and you have certainly brightened my morning. Blessing on you, Marti |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A breath of fresh, spring air on a too still morning! Thanks for the gift! Art |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, what a surprise to find this one on top right now! Thank you from my heart dear Tammy, dear Dixie, dear Susan, dear Art and dear Marti, for the loving replies, for telling me you appreciated it. Have all a wonderful day. Here it is raining, it's all grey, but the sun shines within, always! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Margherita, You might be interested to know, that my parish is having "Margherita Madness" on April 25 and 26. Rum, Tequila, grass skirts, etc. Do us urban cat lickers have more fun or what? Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lol, Bobby, you mean Margherita-Daisy Madness, Pizza Margherita Madness or "St. Margherita" Madness?? Grass skirts? How funny! With all that Tequila stuff everybody will end up stretched out on the grass in the end I fear! Yes I think you know how to have fun in your parish. God enjoys us when we are celebrating life. Thank you for the smiles. Love, Margherita |
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