Open Poetry #42 |
rumors in walnut veneer |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometimes we might be leaves just playing eyes there across the ocean of a room with walls of lovers in sad glances dancing but there is more in our lips the whispering of slick sounds that only each other can hear and pretend to ignore until the reactions are revealed and we press our skins together to our own belly familiar songs and let our arms drink their fill til they hold on to each other to keep from falling to quickly into it won't ever go away again _______________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
sometimes we might be leaves just playing eyes there across the ocean of a room with walls of lovers in sad glances dancing Mr Daark...lovely visual here.. love your words... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Ahh, dear POET D., these are breathtakingly intense words! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Wonderfully Written! ARCTIC WIND |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
moment by moment, you caught them like a hidden camera. enjoyed. as always. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This is truly beautiful Dark… so intense. Tammy<333 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks lady friend _______________ ms mar, thank you babe for letting me touch your eyes ___________________ a&w, thank you my friend _______________ seoulair, thanks so much for the read ______________ ms larry'smom, thanks lady friend for the touch on these words |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D A poem to hold close. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe for reading and holding.. |
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